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’s a living grave where the rules of earth and the warmth of the sun no longer apply But then something unexpected happens Persephone finds herself falling for the god who abducted her the god who has chased her for five thousand years a god who is none other than death himself HadesRipped out of the underworld by Zeus Persephone must find a pomegranate to return to the realm of the dead and to her beloved Consuming only a seed of the. I wish there was a lower star rating than 1 This is a horrible book and I am really surprised how the author ever managed to get this published Either she was high when she was writing this or this was book written by her five year old Her metaphors made me cringe the entire time and I read the entire book hoping that it will get better I am not much of a grammar police so I won t bother commenting on her grammar but her writing style and metaphors made me gag I felt like a shop vac had been thrust down my throat and had sucked all my organs out WHATWHAT seriouslycocaine is a hell of a drug Your Naughty Playmate 3 - Cuckolding Fantasy pomegranate to return to the realm of the dead and to her beloved Consuming only a seed of the. I wish there was a lower star rating than 1 This is a horrible book and I am really surprised how the author ever managed to get this Haute Chinese Cuisine from the Kitchen of Wakiya published Either she was high when she was writing this or this was book written by her five year old Her metaphors made me cringe the entire time and I read the entire book hoping that it will get better I am not much of a grammar Twisted police so I won t bother commenting on her grammar but her writing style and metaphors made me gag I felt like a shop vac had been thrust down my throat and had sucked all my organs out WHATWHAT seriouslycocaine is a hell of a drug

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Asphodel The Underworld Trilogy #1

Fruit of the dead would bind Persephone to spend her life beneath the earth’s core with Hades But Zeus has reduced every pomegranate tree in the world to ash Except one Persephone must locate that one remaining pomegranate tree a uest that could ignite a war between the two mightiest of the god’s A war that could cause Persephone to lose the only family she’s ever known or give up a love that comes only once every five thousand yea. This is like 25 stars than 3I really really wanted to like this book I love Hades and Persephone I love retellings and I love ya novels so it should have been a perfect fit for me Unfortunately it didn t really work for meFirst off it should have been looked over once or twice by an editor Some of the mistakes may have just been because of the format there were a couple of times were parts of sentences were repeated and I know that ereaders sometimes do wonky things to the formatting but others were easily fixable grammatical errors such as lie v lay The romance felt off to me Persephone fell in love with Hades after two days Previous to this she had hated him for kidnapping her but once she realized that he actually felt something for her beyond just seeing her as a prize she immediately fell in love with him I don t find that particularly believable and would have really liked some development of their romancePersephone didn t really sound like a 5000 year old goddess She sounded like a modern day teenager Also it seemed kind of pointless for her to be going to high school I know Demeter wanted them to blend in but Persephone looks like she is seventeen It probably wouldn t have seemed too weird if she wasn t going to high school and if someone asked about it either say that she was older than she looks or home schooled because honestly not having her go to school would probably have made their hiding easierI didn t really like how Hades was portrayed I always interpreted him as preferring to stay away from Mount Olympus and the other gods and he never really seemed that bitter over getting the Underworld He actually seemed like one of the better gods to me even with his kidnapping of Persephone Here he seems really bitter and spiteful about being in charge of the Underworld and just seems to hate everything He didn t really work for me Part of this may be because of different ways of looking at Hades if I pretend that he is an original character I can deal with his characterization betterA little thing that annoyed me Persephone bit into the pomegranate Everyone I ve ever known has always just eaten the seeds in fact I don t think you actually can bite into the skin of the pomegranate because it s pretty thickI did enjoy this book to some extent though It was a uick read and I read it all in one sitting and it had a uniue retaking on the myth of Hades and Persephone I probably will pick up the next book because I think that one will be action orientated than this one was and I m interested in seeing the direction this retelling takes Discoveries pomegranate tree in the world to ash Except one Persephone must locate that one remaining A Fire Within: Sekret Machines Series, Book 2 pomegranate tree a uest that could ignite a war between the two mightiest of the god’s A war that could cause Persephone to lose the only family she’s ever known or give up a love that comes only once every five thousand yea. This is like 25 stars than 3I really really wanted to like this book I love Hades and Persephone I love retellings and I love ya novels so it should have been a Idenics perfect fit for me Unfortunately it didn t really work for meFirst off it should have been looked over once or twice by an editor Some of the mistakes may have just been because of the format there were a couple of times were Night Owl Loonette parts of sentences were repeated and I know that ereaders sometimes do wonky things to the formatting but others were easily fixable grammatical errors such as lie v lay The romance felt off to me Persephone fell in love with Hades after two days Previous to this she had hated him for kidnapping her but once she realized that he actually felt something for her beyond just seeing her as a Deadshifted (Edie Spence, prize she immediately fell in love with him I don t find that El agujero del infierno particularly believable and would have really liked some development of their romancePersephone didn t really sound like a 5000 year old goddess She sounded like a modern day teenager Also it seemed kind of The Essential Jim Brickman, Vol. 4 (Piano/Vocal/Chords) pointless for her to be going to high school I know Demeter wanted them to blend in but Persephone looks like she is seventeen It Teddy probably wouldn t have seemed too weird if she wasn t going to high school and if someone asked about it either say that she was older than she looks or home schooled because honestly not having her go to school would Calling Me Home probably have made their hiding easierI didn t really like how Hades was The Taint of Lovecraft portrayed I always interpreted him as Mr. Francis Wife preferring to stay away from Mount Olympus and the other gods and he never really seemed that bitter over getting the Underworld He actually seemed like one of the better gods to me even with his kidnapping of Persephone Here he seems really bitter and spiteful about being in charge of the Underworld and just seems to hate everything He didn t really work for me Part of this may be because of different ways of looking at Hades if I The Shadow People pretend that he is an original character I can deal with his characterization betterA little thing that annoyed me Persephone bit into the The Aliens Mate (Warriors of Luxiria, pomegranate Everyone I ve ever known has always just eaten the seeds in fact I don t think you actually can bite into the skin of the Degrees of Elevation pomegranate because it s Demons, Yes--But Thank God for Good Angels pretty thickI did enjoy this book to some extent though It was a uick read and I read it all in one sitting and it had a uniue retaking on the myth of Hades and Persephone I The Pride and Prejudice Movie Cookbook probably will Vietnam Perkasie pick up the next book because I think that one will be action orientated than this one was and I m interested in seeing the direction this retelling takes

Summary ç E-book, or Kindle E-pub ☆ Lauren Hammond

Persephone has been running for her entire life Running from the humans to keep her immortality a secret And running from a man who haunts her dreams Not a man but a god who will stop at nothing until he gets what he wants And what he wants most is herTrapped in the realm of the dead Persephone plans to return to the land of the living The underworld is a terrifying place where ghosts roam freely three headed dogs patrol the gates and it. I am only half way through this book but I can t take it any I love Greek myth stories and I love YA novels but when the book is missing crucial wordspunctuationcharacter traits it eats at my enjoyment I don t think this book has ever even heard the word editor On top of that the heroine is though immortal acting like a child She has supposedly lived for centuries and yet she still cries at the drop of a hat still flustered by a cute boy still doesn t uestion why her mother won t answer some basic uestions I know its a YA novel but I feel like she would be self possessed by now Not exactly someone I would like to look up to as a strong independent woman Not to mention her emotions are lighting uick and can pull a 180 on a dime making it hard to connect with her in any wayso far the most memorable scene to illustrate this is where she first gets into the Underworld and confronts Hades with fury for kidnapping her Not a page later she is bawling and I am not making this up wrapped around his leg like a four year oldThe writing also leaves something to be desired too many cliches and not enough original thought And when there is some original thought it doesn t connect with what s going on and you have to pause and go what Author needs to look up the meaning of reverse psychologyI am going to continue reading because there must have been something in this book that other people liked but so far nothing


10 thoughts on “Asphodel The Underworld Trilogy #1

  1. says:

    Yay Nobody loves mythological re tellings than me

  2. says:

    I am only half way through this book but I can't take it any I love Greek myth stories and I love YA novels but

  3. says:

    The mythology in this was just god awful that was bad wasn't it? moving on One of the things that kept niggling a

  4. says:

    Well it was a great idea executed in a very poor way It was a complete struggle to read and nearly impossible to enjoy Persephone is thousands of years old but has the maturity of a seven year old She is whinny irritating dull and honestly uite dumb she can't figure out things that are blatantly obvious I didn't like her and could not relate to her She goes to high school and likes a boy at her high school I'm in my 20s and could

  5. says:

    I wish there was a lower star rating than 1 This is a horrible book and I am really surprised how the author ever managed to get this published Either she was high when she was writing this or this was book written by her fi

  6. says:

    SynopsisHades is lonely and bored ruling the underworld Zeus has promised him a wife but has refused to actually give her to

  7. says:

    The editorial mistakes Dear god Ms Hammond if you're having trouble finding a copy editor I am available for hire

  8. says:

    Asphodel noun any of various Old World herbs especially genera Asphodelus and Asphodeline of the lily family with flowers in usually long erect racemes This book is a light read and I’m pretty sure adolescents

  9. says:

    This is like 25 stars than 3I really really wanted to like this book I love Hades and Persephone I love retellings and I love ya nove

  10. says:

    Story was really weak in the beggining Persephone acts like a adolescent though she is five thousand years old goddess It really made me mad so immature But later she becomes better not that she loses all of her childness Hades was like how i

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